I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi i'm Ellie,how are you today? I really like how you presented this it looks very interesting. Something that you could do next time would be adding the other planets. I hope you have a great rest of you day byeeeeeee
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Hi i'm Ellie,how are you today? I really like how you presented this it looks very interesting. Something that you could do next time would be adding the other planets. I hope you have a great rest of you day byeeeeeee
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